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an entire spinning rock of
7 billion
filled with people spilling the
contents of their heads
just so they can feel
their confused attempts get
deflected
there's no feeling in the feeling
of rejection
and it infects them...
this void
this emptiness
it's so intense, and they wonder
why it makes no sense
they wonder why it hurts to
breath, so they assume they're
drowning in this murky sea
and subconsciously deny them
selves oxygen
in disbelief
that they will ever find
someone that can make
them feel
.
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:iconfuckerm:
fuckerm Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
very nice...
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:iconfleetakeflight:
fleeTakeflight Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you write the way i wish i could write
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:icondavidatwell:
DavidAtwell Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
well whats stoppin you, then?
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:iconfuckerm:
fuckerm Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2012
writers block!
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:iconyourbuddybill:
YourBuddyBill Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
A-yup.
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