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it happens as it always happens
meanwhile, the drastic double-back
they can't see where they are going
with no light, so they darkstep...
but if there is trouble in paradise
it's a major concern--
we all love sunny days
but everyone hates a sunburn...
it's the way they crash n' burn
that makes their face taste the
rugburn in a way that they make
sure no one else gets hurt...
and the shallow will pull you under,
so deep... take my word for it...
i don't like it.
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YourBuddyBill Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is impressive.
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myworldinwords Jan 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love the line: everyone loves sunny days but we all hate a sunburn.
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