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i throw my habits into the fire
it's an uphill battle with bald tires
it's like driftin' off the roadside and slippin' into the gutter
when i smother my worries avoiding slumber
so no wonder i hurry so drastiC
then be actin' all like,
"i don't know what happened"
plastic bags of magic explodin' open
spraying rays of madness that we're smokin'
chokin' on broken pieces of our lives
hopin' we'll achieve somethin'
before we die--
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xxBoneless Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Epic.
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fleeTakeflight May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
plastic bags of magic explodin' open
spraying rays of madness that we're smokin'....
hell yes, love it.
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:icondavidatwell:
DUDE i know that was one of those lines that just comes out when you're writin so intensely you keep breakin pencil lead
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melly4260 Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This would be awesome spoken-word or rap...
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:icondavidatwell:
thank you... thats cuz it is!
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melly4260 Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
way kool...:)
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