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my eyes start to swirl
vision is tunneled, frozen gaze
i'll fall while you dance n' twirl
i'll stumble with my broken ways
eclipsed in sound you cannot feel
it blocks any attempt to show...
what gets around to you has appeal
but it's not any better than what i know-
     ┌                      ┐
      cuz the best is always
          better than me
      and the rest is always
         catchin' up to me
        so i'm left laughin'
            at my dreams
          i'm left laughin'
             at destiny-
      └                      ┘
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Candye18x37 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012   General Artist
i love the way your writing has grown...a display of romantic swirls of love and madness...I like it.
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Alyssa00045 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, I really love this one..
For some reason.
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DavidAtwell Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
its cuz you got good taste in poetry.
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:iconalyssa00045:
Alyssa00045 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Right, that would make sense.
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