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-choose your words slyly, cuz it's whatever.
it's one letter and it's better than never.
second-guessin' expressions can go on forever,
but only the clever can hold up in this endeavor....
-and if you cant handle the weather,
if you cant remember the rain bein' wetter,
drippin' onto the windows longer than
God meant for Mother Earth when he blessed her,
-just relax and sit back... first, reflect on some thinGs.
matter of fact, take a nap, get a restful nights sleep.
(thinking right completely blindsides when sleeping,
see, leading to discreetly finding real meaning....)

-common misconceptions aren't always the best to get;
if you can't follow the definition, don't swallow the rest of it.
the words will get hotter with the fire your confusion lit,
*but the burn doesn't bother if it was right to begin with... ←
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MFPalmer Featured By Owner May 23, 2012
why do I feel as if a part of that...nvm...bravo
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Candye18x37 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012   General Artist
this is amazing..
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DavidAtwell Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012
Thanks
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AlexisLish Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Logic and straight Thinking
Not all are gifted So we try to Learn
Wish me Luck so that I can Earn
The Gift of Speaking
The Privilege of Teaching

Nicely Done David ^^
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DavidAtwell Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012
thank you... and Good Luck!
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AlexisLish Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Arigatou Gozaimasu ^^
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Alyssa00045 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ILOVEIT!
This is nothing less than amazing, just as all your other writings are~

Keep up the epic work lol ^ ^
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DavidAtwell Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012
aw shucks, thanks
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Alyssa00045 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome~ c:
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SkylarKale Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2012  Student Writer
Sweet
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