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stood
perfectly still
gain momentum
seek the thrill
turbulent velocity
the shriek of the static
peeking through the fabric of
the interesting and automatic
i panic
jarring waves
rise, and break
back to safety
just a minute too late
something's chasing
so, stood
perfectly still
embrace the impact
that brought shambles
seemingly innocent things
or if you can act it
succumb to the needs
like the last step you took
then, stood
perfectly still...
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Feb 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This poem is so beautiful. I like the mood it put me in. Great one :clap:
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